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Friday, October 21, 2016

The norty witch

Monday, 17 October 2016
The norty witch
One amazing morning Jacob stomped down to James room and opened his door and said “wake up James it is a good day today, we are going out  camping”. So he woke up got changed and packed himself some lunch a water bottle and togs in case  they saw a lake they could go for a swim. “READY JACOB” James screamed “OK let's get in the car and go” so they got in the car and went off.


On the way to their destination, they saw rabbits, horses, crows and of course trucks with loggers going past. A while after that they finally arrived at their destination James and Jacob got out of their car and put on their bag and of they went. While they walked down this path James  saw a little lake so they had a little dip for like an hour and 30mins. After they got out of the water Jacob grumbled “where's my bag” then  Jacob asked James “do you know where my phone is James” he replied “NO my bag is missing too??”.

They were looking for their stuff for an hour and then they saw these footprints on the grass so they followed it. It led them to this old den. James said “that looks scary”. They walked towards the door and Jacob stood on a paper. So he picked it up and there was a photo of a witch that stole stuff.  James was like that must be the one that stole our  stuff so they walked inside and there was  a heap of stuff. Jacob said “there is my phone look I found your bag too”. They grabbed their stuff went back to their car and went home. When they got home their mum asked “how was it” and they just said “we are never going camping again ahaha” then went to there room.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Hemi,
    I really liked the descriptive words you used, like stomped and screamed. They added to the drama of the narrative. I have been camping but have never seen a witch, thankfully. Do you enjoy writing stories?
    Whaea Maria

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